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  • 06-09-2017
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Can you plz proofread for me and tell me if there are any grammar mistakes or to fix something

Can you plz proofread for me and tell me if there are any grammar mistakes or to fix something class=

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daejicake
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  • 06-09-2017
I would suggest saying, "I would make an excellent president because...." (List your reasonings). For "Helpful," you don't need to capitalize the first letter. Make sure you add in an "and helpful," since you're finishing off the reasons.

Canadente is spelled incorrectly. It should be "Candidate."

Lastly, I would suggest saying "have had experience...."


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